You crack me up Meta :) I adore your undying imagination. From ping pong tables to coffee machines, you never cease to make me smile with your rapid fire waves of ideas.
Anyway, you're very welcome for the edit, as small as it was. I'm sorry I don't always have the opportunity to read your drafts, but I usually set time aside to check them out if I have a spare moment.
Your English is satisfactory. You're good enough to get the point across, though there may be a couple of mistakes from time to time. You and anybody else learning English shouldn't beat yourself up over it too much, as I hear it is quite difficult to learn as a second language. This is a writing site after all: we're all here to learn to write better, so don't hesitate to ask myself or others for help. It might take some time to get around to, but we'll do it in time.
Okayy, so Blast Fishing… it was hard to make out at first but I think I'm starting to get it. Please correct me if I'm mistaken:
The Zeta Cell was having more success in some aspects than the Insurgency. Because the Zeta Cell and it's personnel are unorganized, the Insurgency doesn't want to associate themselves with Zeta. However, the Insurgency still wanted to replicate some of what Zeta had done — their "formula" as you said — to further their own success. This is where the whole Blast Fishing mission comes into play.
I'd like to go over these
- Gaining knowledge about the anomalies
Alright, makes sense. As long as its a CI controlled operation, I don't see the problem in housing an item in a civilian residence. It'd help us monitor how a subject/item effect each other in a real-world situation.
Okay, I understand where you're going with this. By putting the item in an area where its vulnerable, this will be more likely to draw opposing organizations to us. However, I don't really think it is a good idea: it sets us up for the possibility of losing the item and endangering the civilian(s) (which probably wouldn't matter to the Insurgency, but you get my point).
- Cause Chaos and Destruction
This is a tad ridiculous in my opinion. Yes, while we are a terrorist-political organization, that doesn't mean that we like bombing shit and killing people because "hey, I feel like today's a good day to cause chaos and destruction". Everything we do that is related to causing destruction has a purpose.
So I feel like you could be going somewhere with this, specifically the part about gaining knowledge about the anomalies by setting the anomaly loose into the unaware public. Some things here gotta go, but I feel like this could potentially be something interesting.