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Instead of saying quickly why not give some example times?
the "has found its place in the arsenal" thing is inaccurate, i think (you might look at this, usage may change).

every team member must display competence in the usage of the item. Any team that brings the item out into the field must have the ability to properly contain the produced mass

As the inventor of the Zeta Cell concept i have my problems with this.
I give you something to think about.

You also might want to address what happens to the water of the bio-matter.
Methane and carbon-dioxide percentages line up for this conversion.
The thing would convert water into methane, which is an endothermic reaction, meaning that that requires energy, but the mass heats up?
Also with a this great water to methane conversion why put it in the field at all? Buy water, sell methane. This stuff can make a lot of people rich if used right.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 17 Oct 2017 06:20
JaredJFlemingJaredJFleming 16 Oct 2017 09:32
in discussion General / Per page discussions » Jared's Sandbox

Back to the item, what do you think can be changed or improved about it?

by JaredJFlemingJaredJFleming, 16 Oct 2017 09:32

Not bad at all.

There is a slit chance that you know about the work of Dr. Kandregon or the sugar cube which just makes the story better for me.

I could be completely wrong on that thought thou. Sugar Cube was never made canon and is really hard to find.
Anyway, it fits this story to the letter, even if that was not an electric cable at the end (of the needle).

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 15 Oct 2017 12:06

We just light the fire, what happens next is not our concern.
Worst case, end of the world, that means if we wait a bit we would have the whole planet and every anomaly we might want.

Than again, someone could find a way to get the stuff in line, making it viable as a controlled weapon.

Second to worst, there antidote might be to effective, making the anomaly non large scale viable.
Still, as long as we can mail it a good biological weapon.

We win in every scenario.
(something something food-price speculation)

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 10 Sep 2017 23:09
JaredJFlemingJaredJFleming 10 Sep 2017 12:17
in discussion General / Per page discussions » Jared's Sandbox

True, but is wiping out all the fauna and flora really worth that? If it got out of control, it could wipe out continents.

by JaredJFlemingJaredJFleming, 10 Sep 2017 12:17

First off, congrats on being back in the sandbox.

That tale you and Cad are writing right now confused me a little bit.
Did we send multiple agents including a helicopter and the manifestation of a natural disaster to kill one old Foundation member? (This could have been a one man chlorine gas mission.)
(To be honest, when I read the history tag and the story for the first time I thought we had murdered the entire church for no reason other than chaos.)

This also dose not align with the usage paragraph of the Ward. Assassination is not mentioned in there.
Cad might want to add that.

I am also not sure about the meaning of the cursive text.

Also you have a gab of 15 minutes in there, (the "15 minutes, 30 minutes" thing in the laps at the end, before the two knocks) which are unaccounted for.
It looks like ether a half-sentence is missing or someone changed his mind mid sentence.

If I sound to concentrated on details, that is because I am invested. My way of critiquing a piece has been meet with some "distaste" in the past. If I should refrain from following and commenting on this project please let me know.

Did i get that? by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 09 Sep 2017 20:54

That you can do, but i would first like you to tell me what you thought of it.
I have changed your Slanderman to the point that i am sure the original is no longer recognizable.

I was going for a "victim of something bigger" type of vibe.

Also i think your comment includes a "Which Witch syndrome". Don't worry i still make that to sometimes.

Re: credit by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 08 Sep 2017 12:56
Agent DarkerAgent Darker 08 Sep 2017 03:53
in discussion General / Per page discussions » Hat Move

can I claim partial credit witch includes adding this to my personnel file if appropriate.

credit by Agent DarkerAgent Darker, 08 Sep 2017 03:53
Agent DarkerAgent Darker 08 Sep 2017 03:46
in discussion General / Per page discussions » Hat Move

"larger ONES" not once

by Agent DarkerAgent Darker, 08 Sep 2017 03:46

It is about the founding of Base Six as a containment facility above an entrance to hell.
Than over time the data was lost further and further until no one remembers that this page even existed.

Gucci's original item was only a reference when I started rewriting it.
I only knew that a guy named Tant was going to great lengths to get ride of it.
The story of all of this is still embedded in the source code.

E: This is supposed to be an item, not a tale

Sticky Stick comment by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 02 Sep 2017 22:58

I need a like button for this.

This is a like button.
*presses like button*

Re: questions by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 01 Sep 2017 12:20
"One does not simply write a special ops without a plan"

The funniest thing about this particular signature is that by the time you realize it doesn't say anything it's too late to stop reading it.

Chaos Insurgency Admin (PM)

Re: questions by CytotoxicityCytotoxicity, 01 Sep 2017 10:21

There is more than only one way to answer my riddle.
There is an inflexible story of what has happened in place.

Once you write you answers, I will write the appropriate continuation.
There are three references to other CI Main-side Files in there.

The riddle can be solved, just by using what I have written here.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 26 Aug 2017 20:34

Careful, with the I am back.

I have seen to many say that just to vanish overnight.

I wont demand you to write. This is supposed to be fun after all.
Real live takes priority, I know.

But what are your plans?

One dose not simply
write a special ops without a plan.

Re: questions by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 30 Jul 2017 10:02

Sorry I've got work. And also have school coming up so I got a bit away from this I'm back now though.

Re: questions by Daemian BlackwellDaemian Blackwell, 30 Jul 2017 06:06

If you don't intent to write any further i will remove your entry on the main side and put it here.

Sorry, but as it stands there is just not enough there.

I am still willing to help you, to get this thing of the ground, but i will need some kind of reply.

Re: questions by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 27 Jul 2017 22:35

BTW, you don't have to give up on super soldiers, but perhaps on the whole loyal to the end aspect.

If you where mind washed you might wake up "Bourne"…disaster
If you fear defeat you build an intentional week point, which could be exploited…disaster
If you grow attached to something (your loyal elite for example) it my cloud your judgment…
do you know what happened 1948 in-universe?

Re: questions by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 26 Jul 2017 01:18

I would have liked to talk you out of thous groups.
Costs don't balance a super soldier.

Once one i there it eliminates ever threat below it.
That is a concept called power creep.
Imagen every standard enemy is on the same power level as a stage boss.
The Stage boss would need to be stronger than the strong standard enemy.
Thus eliminating the normal standard enemy.

To balance a super soldier it would need to have a drawback so strong that we cant use him as an easy way to end all problems.

There is also that bit about the state the insurgency (from my point of view) is currently in.
We are the guy without funding, resources or personal.
We are not a government organization or the foundation, as you said.
The Budgets of operations are cut extremely fast.

Guards are necessary, but tying our best guys to any position would make them inflexible.

But i have moved to far of point.

My challenge to you:
Write a story with them.
Show me what you have in mind.

Dose not have to be an origin story or a mission.
I might just have no idea where you want to go with this.

Re: questions by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 26 Jul 2017 01:12

i dont understand why you add the under decommision and terminated to the groups.

questions by Daemian BlackwellDaemian Blackwell, 26 Jul 2017 00:40

there are only two teams of super soldiers. the empress' and rook 1.
and they are only for specific operations. yes i get that it sort of a cliche but i don't believe that the CI with their looser morals wouldnt attempt to make a super soldier or two. i put restriction via a cost. cause the CI would be limited to how much money they have and super soldiers are expensive AF.

Re: Super Soldiers by Daemian BlackwellDaemian Blackwell, 26 Jul 2017 00:35
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