It turned out WONDERFULS!!!!+1
Date: 07 Jan 2014 22:22
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The overall article itself is rather dull. I mean I like the concept of it, but there isn't anything here that really grabs me or keeps me interested.
Also, I think there can be much more work done on the test logs. I mean, you have a chamber that can make events and objects at will with the proper equation, yet you only show 2 tests. I feel as though this can be expanded to add a bit more to the article.
And another thing…
Dr. ██████ opens the test chamber door, enters black hole parameters, and presses enter.
I'm sorry but it just boggles my mind as to why the CI would ever do this or even allow it to happen. What did they expect was going to happen? It just screams stupid to me.
I fixed the test log, maybe I could've thought that through a little more, my reasoning while writing was that because it had no effect on the test chamber, they might assume that it would have no effect at all, and were horribly, horribly wrong.
As for you finding it uninteresting, if I can think of anything to spice it up I'll add it.
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