How did you even find your way here?
This is my first sandbox under the CI.
All i am doing nowadays is to correct obvious spelling mistakes
and reading it to remember where i came from.
The reason I am here.
But good to see that someone still reads sandboxes.
I will continue to sort out the spelling, but i think this will never go on the main site.
The current approach to new stories would almost surely shut it down in about a week, even if i had fixed all the spelling.
This is like an old comic. The first appearance of someone.
If you hold comics from the 40th to todays standards, they would get completely panned.
I just fix it up in a copy, to not retroactively change my earliest mistakes, while getting a version ready that is readable without the spelling distracting from the plot, point or characters.
Thanks for finding it. Not many ever did.